All Comments on 'Twilight's Pleasure Ch. 01'

I read it a few times over after the first time. Really liked it! Lookin' forward to the next~

Five inches wide is fucking gigantic. (No pun intended.)

That's either a really strong aphrodesiac, or Blood Elves are very elastic.

As I posted in the prologue, although I went a little more in depth, the rogue would make a great assistant for the dragon. Definitely want to see how you will grow this story.

Great, keep it up. i'd like to see another few chapters with the blood elf, and see where she "ends up". I was also half suspecting The dragoness to inject her as she walked out the door with a sort of sleep-inducing-syrum and use the blood elf as a test subject. I'll be following this story for sure.

Very good plot; well writen!