All Comments on 'Twilight's Pleasure: Prologue'

I realize this was a prologue but cripes you took 13 paragraphs before getting to the the fact that she can morph into female human form to seduce men. That was really boring. The rest of the story describing her experiments was not much better. The main idea of a prologue is to set the background (which you did) and make the reader want to read the rest of the story(which you did NOT do). Your writing technique is good but I will not be reading any following chapters, sorry.

Sounds promising, please continue

Interesting ideas for experiments

Don't squander it. I'll be looking forward to more.

Writing was a bit slow but still like the setting and direction of the story just waiting for the conflict

I'd like it better if it were told in the first person, either by the dragon or one of the subjects

Want to see where you will take this, the rogue seems like she'd be a valuable assistant. Every Mistress needs Factors ( people who do business, transactions for another; an agent).