All Comments on 'Twin Hearts'

Let me guess... Steffen just happens to have a certain security camera tape?

Seriously though - great job, excellent and sexy story! I wonder if such a group could gain Western appeal right now, though - in Asia it would be more accepted I think.

All that build up for one blow job scene and only two pages next chapter longer story and more sex

I really like your writing style. You make Paul and the girls very real, and I'd love to see where this goes. I agree that I'd have liked to see a little bit more than just one blowjob, but if there's a follow-up chapter, I'm fine with waiting to see how Ashley plans to continue to seduce him.

Good fun. I liked it. Xxxxx

Humbly awaiting a sequel

This was an awesome start! Really hope to see some more of this soon.

Where's the rest?

Good charaction of the girls and a manager who could be even in more interesting situations. Keep up the good work and please continue the story.

Keep 'em coming...please! Pun intended. :)

Really liked ur story . even though there is just blowjob.

Hope u write some more