All Comments on 'Twin Venture'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not sure how i feel about this

This story was interesting and different from most of the stories I read, but after reading it I wasn't sure if I absolutely hated it or sort of liked it. I really hated Kirsten and was glad she was brutalized. I enjoyed Kisten setting her up, and felt the rape wasnt violent or traumatizing enough. I like nonconsent but this wasnt erotic for me. I think I feel to put off and bitchy towards Kirsten, too focused on violence, to find pleasure in the sexual aspects of this story. I dont know maybe it was too different from the usual stuff I like and my brain was like, "what the hell is this?" Maybe I just wasnt in the right mood for this story.

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