All Comments on 'Twins - A New Year'

Thank you so much for sharing. I love this story line and am always looking forward to the next chapter. Great stuff!

Ahaz

There's just something about these characters, and the way the story (all three chapters, so far) that draws the reader into their "lives".

Makes you feel like they're personal friends, and very fortunate friends indeed.

5 Stars, well earned.

Four chapters!

How the hell could I forget "Reunion"???

Sorry 'bout that.

A huge thanks to everyone that has read this series so far. I must apologize for the ending of this one. I originally had the end scene with them on the island condensed, thinking that the story was already too long. After re-read, I decided that it didn't fit with these characters and deserved a more detailed explanation. My error was after final edits, I forgot to remove the short condensed portion, so you see both in the released version.

If you wanted to take a short peak into my writing process, that was part of it. If you enjoyed it anyhow, maybe it wasn't that bad?

Anyhow, thank you everyone! I intend to have one more major chapter for these three, before I give them a much needed vacation. I have so many other drafts started, I feel like I'm letting those characters down now...

RNebular

Great story...truly enjoyed the read!

Hey rnebular,

I would like to see more of them. I've read all Twins chapters and I love them. If you are going to make a final one, please make it longer like 5-6 pages please.

To everyone that is following this series, I am about half done with the final chapter. This group of characters are some of my favorite, and will likely be spotted again someday after this series concludes. As for my delay, I can only offer that real life keeps us all busy... Some more than others, I guess.

RNebular

Please continue this series. It is a great story