All Comments on 'Twins Discover Each Other'

I wish there had been more. I hope there will be more.

Yes a very good story...I hope you have a sequel planned I sense some good things happing between the two.

I liked it a lot and the lack of conversation between them added to the reality .

A very believable story and well written, although you may want to consider getting a proof reader to catch some of your spelling errors. Other than that, great story.

good so far but only gets a 50 because 90% of the writers on this site never finish a story and this needs 1-2 more chapters to tell if they continue if thier mom finds out if she gets pregnant and what happens when they go to college if you continue and finish it properly and soon you will get a better rating

More please. This is a great beginning, so please write more parts to it soon. I really enjoyed reading this story & I hope you will continue it.

Great story, please write another chapter to it.

i knew this guys stories were a waste of time like 90% of the writers here he gets us hooked then vanishes we need a new catagory for unfinished stories or a delete button

I thought your story was very good. Wish I could trade places with him.

My brother and I did more or less the same way

. I had to ask him if he wrote it.

I'm still in love with him and although we are

Both married we still have a "play" when we can.

An auditor may choose to argue but I reckon you have the highest score, before I came along to muck it up, for comments by Anonymous compared with people who identify them selves.

I reckon that was a sensual loving session. Congrats !

Top score for the points tally.

Why does this game always end like this?

A great story please keep writing.

Adamsjr52@twc.com

More please!

Just thought I'd mention that twins are always the same age.