All Comments on 'Twins: Sports, Sex & Trouble Ch. 01'

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ChasBChasBalmost 10 years ago
Next?

Liked the build-up. Is there going to be a real story, along with the sex? It seems as if there might. And if there is bullying on the girls team, the coach should certainly step in and put it down; otherwise there will be no chance of a repeat championship. I'll be waiting to see. But if James and Jane start finding dates, won't it cut down the possibilities of them becoming more sexual? They need to be mostly frustrated.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Starting out negative

Starting out negative is kind of a turnoff...

redlion75redlion75almost 10 years ago

jaz with bro and sis?

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 10 years ago
Nice start

I think the twins need to stay to themselves and find a way to make the girls on Jane's soccer team pay for the mean treatment they gave her.

Thanks for the good read

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