All Comments on 'Twisted Cinderella'

i hope there is more to come, great start

This was a bdsm story and you set the scene for familial incest, so this should rightly be posted elsewhere, It isn't really about lesbian sex. The problem with sexual identity and sexual orientation is that they are different things but people confuse them and use the terms interchangeably. Perhaps your protagonist identifies herself as lesbian, but the orientation of this story is bdsm and incest.

Sorry wrong story

I loved it. :-)

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Deborah

It would be interesting to follow the rest of the fairy tale and see what you do with it.

Good to see a new writer on here, keep going, looking forward to the next part ;)

this is indeed a twisted story, and not in a good way I might add