All Comments on 'Twisted in the Middle'

a shit. all are women dumb like that ? you should not have the right to vote.

I loved your story and I hate when people say stupid shit and negative comments on here. Hopefully you will continue this story but if you feel it has run its course i understand. I will look forward to reading more of your work

Nice! I really enjoy the realistic standard you keep to. The lady in the laundromat and the ending of this story were especially nice. I should mention, however, that two more guys randomly appeared out of thin air at the top of page two. Not sure who Justin and Dave are, but I kind of feel like a page went missing.