All Comments on 'Twisted Love Ch. 04'

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I AM OFFICIALLY HOOKED!!! Next chapter please

I love these two characters! Look out! Emily is coming out of her shell. She just needed the right man for the job. And whatta man! I've always wanted a fellow metal fan boyfriend who's gorgeous, wild and sensitive all rolled into one neat package. Only on Literotica...<sigh>

Looking forward to more of your writing, Soft1017!

Whew! I need a nap now. I look forward to each update and this one was worth you taking your time and doing it right. Thanks.

Five.

very nice update, I am so hooked on Emily and Luke

Great update. Love the chemistry!

Luke does a body right!!

Damn that was HOT!!!!!!!!!!

I didn't think Emily would have sex with Luke so soon. I hope Emily doesn't regret what they did in the morning and go running like her ass is on fire.

I'm actually disappointed that she fucked him so soon

It was hot but just a little too fast and ferocious

Too many times women focus on their individual flaws, when most men either like the whole package or not. When we're attracted, we don't see details like scars and love handles. We're just wired simple like that. I especially like that Emily got over herself quickly. Although I'll repeat what others have said: action is a little fast. Oh yeah, and hawt too!!!

Can't wait for more!

I understand everyone's concerns with how fast everything went for the lovers. However, consider this story and the previous one I wrote, as practice stories. I'm working on a new story which I'm going to take my time with. I'm glad you all at least liked some of the elements of Twisted Love. Thanks for all your feedback!

I want the next chapter, like, now. That was super hot. That better not be the last chapter.

Also, I'm not as bothered by the first date sex as I am about the lack of condom usage. It's all fun and games until they find out that chick Luke had sex with four months ago had HPV. No matter how hot for each other they were both of them should have respected their bodies enough to slap on a rubber.

Wow, what a heated chapter. I was wondering when they would get it on, but this chapter was off the charts HOT! Lol!!! Great job, I can't wait for the next post :-)

I've just happened across your stories via the "New Stories" category and I must say again, WOW! I love your style of writing and use of dialogue and that just as things start hotting up, it's the end of the chapter, leaving me hanging for the next instalment - sign of a good writer.

Love your characters Emily and Luke and how you bring them to life in your story. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Hope she doesn't regret it or that Luke let's her down or breaks her heart :)

Keep up the good writing!

Mynxx UK

you should go more into their story. Are they falling or jusr a one time thing?

Finish it PLEASE

Please write the next chapter soon!!!

now!

As the title says I love it! I hope you have more coming!

That was smoking hot!!! You'e got to update this story.

If you are gonna update any of these stories make it be this one Luke is so hoott with his rough sex and dirty talk and Em calling him daddy was just soooo goooood next time I'd like to see Emily's confidence grow as well as Luke's possessive jealousy I imagine the sex with that would be through the roof looking forward to it

Loved it. Please continue!

Please continue, I need to know more about this couple

hmm... ;l the dirty daddy name ah, cant hang. but other than that its good good

Really enjoyed this story, please continue on with the story I want to know more.

Thank you to anyone who still reads my work <3

Ive really missed this site because this is where I got my start. Im not sure when or if I'll be posting any more stories here but I appreciate the favs and ratings . Hugs to you all ! :)

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My husband and I wish you would come back sweetie! ^^

This story was actually starting to take off. I'd really like to see how their relationship progressed. Continue!

Im re-writing this story and might turn it into a full length novella. Thanks for reading :)

Love original version! Can't wait for the rewritten version!

Soooooooo what about the tattoo??