All Comments on 'Twisted Twins'

next time leave out the interracial or tag it so we dont have to read it if we are not into it.as soon as she hooked up with the fuckin idiot i quit reading

Sorry.

In addition to the ones already mentioned, let's not forget that the story, itself, was poorly imagined in the first place, and really poorly written. In other words: Lame concept, lame execution.

It's only the first part of the story, not my fault if you lack patience to wait for the next part. There is such a thing as a lead-up, all of these comments are simply prejudgement, and you should be honored I acknowledged them. There's nothing "lame" about it, remember if you don't like a story, you don't really matter.

Concept is decent but writing is sloppy.

Hot story so far. Do you think you might ever get around to finishing it? Please