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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot hot hot

Absolutely fucking sucking red hot, would love to have tongue fucked those two hot cunts. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
"Felicity had become an English teacher"

"Felicity had become an English teacher"

Unfortunately, she didn't teach you. Your story is full of errors and bad style - four sentences in a row beginning "Felicity..."

Even the title is ungrammatical.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Three hots and then some

Yes, you could do with a bit of proofreading help, but this was a very hot story. Don't let the pedants get you down.

Friskee_cplFriskee_cplabout 6 years ago
Hot hot hot

Yeah ignore the anonymous grammar nazis comments as they're just gutless wonders.

I really enjoyed it. Hot descriptions of sex and a nice build up. Keep up the good work old chap.

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