All Comments on 'Two are Halves of One'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
That is hot!

I liked the realistic workup and the way Emma had to seduce them into it.

WordsWordsWordsWordsWordsWordsover 8 years ago

Absolutely fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Absolutely amazing

Best story ever. Please add more chapters... Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
One of the best...

...stories on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
This was truly great

Some stories turn in to long threads and dont deserve it. this one needs to turn in to a series. loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh.My.God.

Well written and perfectly paced. Wow!

LoveMenLoveSexLoveMenLoveSexover 8 years ago
Richly developed and well written!

With a careful and detailed buildup, this turned from a college-twin tale into a very good and highly stimulating story. Great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Need More

This is awesome! You're talented. Make the sequel please! I would to know what happen afther that! Is it just one-night-sex or will be more than that?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I want more!

I usually read these stories just for entertainment but this one really got me going and wanting more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
pretty juvenile...

...one of those you fast forward and give one star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Consent

I’ve never commented on one of these before but the amount of consent easily put in and protection without losing a beat of the story is honestly impressive and good because consent is important.

FestofishFestofishover 5 years ago
Awesome!

I shot a huge load over this story.

AmethystForresterAmethystForresterover 4 years ago

Hot. Beautiful. Perfect.

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