All Comments on 'Two Daiquiris'

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NormCastleNormCastleover 12 years ago
First try, really?

EXCEPTIONAL,very good...one cock up...always enjoy girl on girl stories, IF they make sense and are plausible...excellent job, looking forward to their continuing adventure...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The best story I have ever read!

This story is absolutely amaising! Is this really your first stoy?

The description of the love between the two girlfreinds is fantastic. You are having very special details, that makes your story so inceadible.

I just can't stop praising this novel.

Keep up the good work!!!

Eduard, Denmark

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great

Loved it and do not wait too long to give us another chapter of these two.

NeckroSabreNeckroSabreover 12 years ago
Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Pretty Good

Really enjoyed your story, your description of the two hot girls making love was really nice, you have a way with words. Want moar!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

going good so far. I think Mom knows the girls are interested in each other, from comments she made at the beginning of Chapter 1. wonder if mom likes to play too?

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