All Comments on 'Two Do Ron-Ron Ch. 03'

Enjoyed the story, probably as much as you did writing it!

I always have trouble in knowing where to go from here as there doesn't seem to be much further to go unless it becomes a regular story with plot and counter plot. I shall now take a look at your list and hope, anticipate more delightfull stories.

Hi hippiegirl,

I was worried for this girl right throughout. Being a slave at the will or beck and call of a perfect stranger is like shooting off into space. You have no idea where you'll finish up or in what condition you'll be. I can't imagine being in a situation like that - voluntarily.

It's a powerful story and you handled it very well indeed. I wonder the storyline and eventuality if one particular gurest happened to be Veronica's little brother, or father, or despised uncle? How would you deal with that?

I gave this story five stars and thank you for a wonderful piece of erotica.

Les.

well told! You din't develop the characters as far as you might have but you presented them quite well.

Thanks.