by MrsJ
i was bored reading your story but i gave it a chance by reading the whole story it didn't get any better. so with that being said it was a waste of my time.
We know these issues exist at college but it went a bit too far with the quantiy. Good use of the common English
The story line was developed satisfactorily and maintained to the end even though the closing was a bit abrupt.
could have been a but longer though.