All Comments on 'Two Female Models Wanted'

by LadyDaisy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Rubbish

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
no not rubbish

I though it was written good, and hope there is more to come

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please no more!

This was not good at all. Not sexy. Not erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Rubbish. Absolute shit.

RUBBISH!!! I didn't enjoy how you cut to the point... didn't even cum :( add more detail!! Pleaaase!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
ho hum

Dryer lint.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very Short, But Very Sexy! _ 5-Stars, I Loved It!

Hallo LadyDaisy!

It is very short, more like what I think of as a prologue,,, but scents there is no chapter-2, that makes this a very erotic short story,,, yes!

And now to the other 4-anonymous readers.... This is erotic porn, not written works of english literature, so to you 4 (AFA's)_Anonymous Fucken Assholes! .... Just fuck-off! .... Love Kat. :-)

Thank-you for sharing your lovely story.

Gay Kat.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 4 years ago

Dont you just hate when spiteful people write shitty reviews, under anonymity? While not the Great American Novel, I thought this was very good. I also think another chapter, or two would be nice

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