by LadyDaisy
I though it was written good, and hope there is more to come
RUBBISH!!! I didn't enjoy how you cut to the point... didn't even cum :( add more detail!! Pleaaase!
Hallo LadyDaisy!
It is very short, more like what I think of as a prologue,,, but scents there is no chapter-2, that makes this a very erotic short story,,, yes!
And now to the other 4-anonymous readers.... This is erotic porn, not written works of english literature, so to you 4 (AFA's)_Anonymous Fucken Assholes! .... Just fuck-off! .... Love Kat. :-)
Thank-you for sharing your lovely story.
Gay Kat.
Dont you just hate when spiteful people write shitty reviews, under anonymity? While not the Great American Novel, I thought this was very good. I also think another chapter, or two would be nice