All Comments on 'Two Friends'

by AJParliament

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing build up

I love this story. It describes a slow increase in sexual desire. I feel though that the alcohol was unnecessary as it undermined the experience. Overall though i loved it.

andy505050andy505050about 6 years ago
Fantastic

Very real and natural. Loved it. Hope you'll write some more, soon.

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGover 1 year ago

Nice...short & sweet...yet erotic

Also, realistic...this happens quite often, I think!! God's On Them!!

Five Stars...🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"Eventually we started to get tipsy off the rum"

Yup. All the time. Wonder why all those laws to avoid sex under the influence exists. Probably just a bunch of prudes.

TransguycharlieTransguycharlie12 months ago

Oh god I’m so turned on by this

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