All Comments on 'Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 10'

I absolutlly loved everything about this chapter. Even Laura's part I liked it, even though I think she shouldn't come in so often. I find so sexy all the evolution between kent and bailey, their development is amazing! Well done, great job. I'm loving every chapter of this series, can't wait to read the rest!

Ok. I know that saying this is the best story on Literotica is a big statement. But I have never been so on the edge of my seat waiting for each chapter. I love this story!

She's an important spice in this recipe, and she's enhanced the flavour of the stew every step of the way.

I'm also glad you're enjoying the story as much as I like writing it.

Thanks,

Xav.

I awaited the weekend a bit feverish how it would go. And I wasn't disappointed.

It's a great push foward for Bailey and Kent. And even better, we now have to care for Laura's well-being. I love it.

I can't wait for the next loooong girl-girl meeting where they recall things and try to understand how to go on. Their friendship is really a great thing and feels like the backbone of the story.

And we must not forget Laura's needs. :D

I agree this is the best story on Literotica. I would be interested is learning a bit about how Laura developed an affinity for spanking. Maybe a little about her spanking history and how she got to this point. Love the story,

I laughed out loud at her last sentence 😄Thank you very much 👍

Still addicted, keep writing.

/happysigh

Just binged all 10 chapters at once! Grest story! Would love to see a wheelbarrow position tossed in there sometime, or maybe even some way for Bailey and Laura to spank each other (contest?). Looking forward to what you have planned for xmas! Was disappointed when I caught up and realized I'd have to wait now.

More please! :)

warrant another feather in your cap (lol) but you have managed to get me to see the erotic potential of an act I never before could see any eroticism in. That was awkwardly worded.Essentially I can now see how spanking might be erotic; in the past I just couldn't comprehend such a thing. I knew it existed, but it was baffling. In that sense I suppose you *have* successfully corrupted me. ;-)

.. and I love it, how his little gift has an aftermath in chapter 13.

Something that would be interesting to expand, though it should not become repetetive (I trust you on that :) ).

> .. and I love it, how his little gift has an aftermath in chapter 13.

> Something that would be interesting to expand, though it should not become

> repetitive (I trust you on that :) ).

That was my chief worry when I bit off a debt of $200. So far so good.

"That was my chief worry when I bit off a debt of $200. So far so good."

In fact I am a bit sad, that it is "ONLY" 200 :D

So far, even I grow more ideas/hopes in my mind than there is dept.

White Oaks Mall..... I've managed to narrow down the province to Ontario, this wouldn't happen to be set in London would it? What with Fanshaw being the primary college there

LOL these two remind me of an old tv show my ex used to watch, the main characters there were both so socially awkward they took forever to figure it out too. That was a hit show and this is definitely a hit story. Well done!

I think that works and I kept it up for 29 chapters.

In story-time, it was only a couple months, which seems (from my experience) to be a perfectly acceptable naivete duration.

She didn't leave her panties behind

dude i don't get how you are able to drag this shit out so much. you have a talent for this. so many times, authors drag it out for a short while and then change the whole plot by having the main characters fuck, and that always kills it for me, just like every tv show with, "will they, won't they," vibes that ends with, "they did."

dasgoodshit

The lead up is very good. As a guy, I’m like, just kiss her, touch her, use her… he has either much more patience than I, or is actually that naïve going to college.

I'm enjoying every bit of this story, a lot! I'm willing to bet you enjoyed writing it, a lot. On to the next chapter and the anticipation is killing me.