by LoveIsUniversal
An instantaneous anal penetration with no mention of even saliva as a lubricant, followed by a frenzy of unlubed fucking.... not realistic.
A good threesome would make a nice followup.
As hot as this story could be, a bit more detail of the characters descriptions and some reality of fucking for the first time would make it feel more real! I highly doubt fucking dry for the first time would be very satisfying for either, and def. not getting pounded like that! The more realistic the action, and the more descriptive detail the easier it is to visualize things in the minds eye! First time anal sex is generally somewhat painful even when prepared and stretched properly. Lube, lube, lube! Hot fantasy.... Good effort