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Looking forward to more of this story and other stories from you as well.

A little while later I could hear Michelle coming down the hall. She opened the door and was obviously a little drunk. "Hon, we drank too much can you pull out the hide abed for Michelle?"

Oops.

So Terry wants to show Michelle her trimmed pussy. How does that jump to Michelle WATHCING? Of course she going to watch Terry shoe her a trimmed pussy.

You missed something here or over-edited.

"I was a little nervous, this was the first pussy I had touched since I was a young man..." wait, what? You didn't just touch your wife's pussy?

How do you caress an inner breast?

"You could just see some tongues touching," sounds like a fantasy. Either you see them touching, or you don't. Be clear about this. And how many tongues anyway?

Make this a better story.