by Cia81
As I said...a great beginning, kind of mesmerizing, actually, what with all the possibilities.
There's going to be plenty of drama here, lol! I like the set up and the mission they are on. I have an idea Bashta is going to drive Cavel nuts before it's all over *grin*
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Enjoying this new chapter. I hope you'll let us know if this is one of the tribes under Velaku and Natham? Are the only ones affected the kitlings of jaguars or are other kinds of Catera sick too? Looking forward to more of this. I agree these two are going to drive each other crazy before long! I look forward to the chase.
I'm hooked.. You did it Chia.. Thanks for sharing this with us
Thanks again for the comments, favorites, and votes! You ask such good questions Cannd, the answers will be coming soon. Hopefully the holiday won't cause too much of a delay but I submitted the next chapter.
Great chapter! Love the alpha-ness lol. I love the description you put into the characters and their actions. Like when saulle puts his cat ears down... could just picture it! Great imagery! Andd Bashta is going to drivee Cavel nutts xD
You came out with another amazing story. I love the conflict, sickness/cure and wild and untamed vs urban and refined. I also like the redefinition of the "chase", making Bashta actually miss all of the attention that Cavel was previously showering on him, yet still knowing that the desire was still there, genius.
I had some issues with the next chapter of this story but it was resolved and I re-submitted yesterday. It should be posted soon. Thank you to everyone for the great reviews, I love to hear how you are enjoying the stories. As for the inappropriate comment, I hope it will be removed soon, I reported it.
Clear imagery. Interesting characters. Catching plot. Looks to me like you have another winner! =D I'm glad that nomoretears00 said you had another story out. This is great. I will be following this one to the end, too. So looking forward to getting the answers to the really great questions cannd asked, too.
5 stars, and 2 thumbs up!
Love cavel but not all that hot about his autocratic bossy behavior but I get it love these stories please keep going with the carthera world
I did keep going, hadesspawn27. I hope you enjoy this story, then continue on to the last in this trilogy, Hypnotic. I also did a short story set in this world with some of the characters, called 'Inside of You'.