All Comments on 'Two Sisters and a Surprise'

I thought this story was very well written.

And two close sister is really cute *wink*

I really enjoyed reading this story, and hope that you continue with a next installment.

The thought of your story happening in my life has got me mmmmmm so hot especially when the brother walks in. Great writing

is there going to be any more chapters coming in this story it was great

i agree, i would love to know what happens once the brother walks in. this was so hot. excellent story. i like that it gets to the point without too much build up!

your stories seem to start in the middle and end quickly, maybe you should write sequels

he doesn't need to write sequals he just needs to learn how to write a proper story and stop wasting the sites space and our time.