All Comments on 'Two to One'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Stop!

Just Stop!

Equality2Equality2about 14 years ago
Thanks

Thanks for an enjoyable well-written story. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I liked it

Pretty good... Congrats!

Alpha2BravoAlpha2Bravoabout 14 years ago
NICE JOB!

FLowed very well, You had me IN the ACTION and VERY TURNED ON! first read since joining!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Great story up until the part where he shuffled to the bedroom. You had me wanting more and then you rushed through the rest of the story. Remember the devil is in the details.

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