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Captain MidnightCaptain Midnightabout 13 years ago
Quite a nice story

Exept for double-spacing within lines, which I've never seen before, and some punctuation problems (damned apostrophes run wild!) this is a very nice and very enjoyable story. I hope to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Just think of how much better this story would have been...

...if you had not dropped out of grade school.

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