All Comments on 'Two Vietnamese Boys Dominate Me Ch. 23'

Your long-winded story is 3 years old and seems to be repeating itself. End it already.

I must agree with the previous comment. Matt hasn't evolved in a long time. at first he was discovering himself and that was interesting. In the later chapters he has simply become a stagnant character, as have the others. If you decide to continue the story line your characters need to grow. I know this is brutal, but it is honest.

Great to see the story continue and with such hot developments. Nice to see the young Asian lads just assume their right to use Matt, in fact revelling in their sense of entitlement. Having the new dimension of Chinese Alpha Paul's perspective was excellent. So humiliating for Matt and being so used by different others than his Masters is a new step on his path to being a toy for any Asian dominant - so no longer can he pretend was just Tan and his talented brother who saw what he truly is! Can hardly wait to read about his forthcoming discussion with Tan! He is bound to suffer humiliation learning more about himself and what he has really become. Enjoyed. Thanks :-)

Very well done, glad you're back, looking forward to more

You have it right. No masters like Asian masters. They must be obeyed.