All Comments on 'Tyke'

Your story was good and had some story and wasn't just a fuck fest which is appriciated. But at the end of the story you seemed to go out of your way to give it an almost happy ever after ending. They get along perfectly despite her sexual history which you never explain but point out that it could be a problem. The story was good but real life doesn't end happy ever after even when it is a good ending it doesn't wrap up in 3 sentances. I am not trying to come off rude because I did enjoy the story but I am hoping that you will continue to submit stories and that you will find my comment helpful.

~Cromm~

Sexy, humorous, and - oh! how refreshing - written in very good and careful English. I agree with the previous comment to some extent. There's nothing wrong with a happy ending, but this one does seem a bit contrived, and the story fizzles out a bit as a result. Still - much pleasure, and may we look forward to more from the same source. Thanks for the enjoyment. Freddy.