by unilive
in this triangle they are all going to hurt at one stage, even if he;s on the winning side. always with love not all runs smooth. look forward to more
I agree with the last post. The story is hot. I like it a lot. It is also different from the usual storyline. You should be proud of your efforts.
Thank you for your encouragement, I appreciate it. As English is not my first language, it does require more efforts and makes it more difficult for me to write this story, but I've enjoyed it a lot so far.
Really enjoying this story. Just started it today and have read the first 3 chapters. I'm really loving it and the sex has been very hot. Keep it up.
Every chapter gets better. The sex is so hot , its gets me hard and horny. I think I am in love with both Mark and Rob. You are incredible and I hope you have someone special that deserves your love.
The first time I read this I was SO not looking forward to where the storyline might go - Mark's split with Rachel being bad or quelle horeur Mark thinking of staying with her and upsetting Rob. That's why I couldn't stop to comment last time I just HAD to know how it would pan out! I'm enjoying it more this time I think even though I know what's going to happen.
As someone's already said the sex/love-making is just getting hotter!
Another great chapter. I was very happy to learn that with all of Rob’s precious sexual partners, he had never been fucked by any of them. That was something special he shared first with Mark. I still assume he topped a lot of then (maybe I’m wrong, I hope). But it is upsetting that Mark is not being honest with Rachel. If he knows he loves Rob and wants to continue to be with him, he should have been brave enough and honest enough to not have sex with her and break it off with her. He is deeply hurting Rachel, Rob, and himself with his cowardly behavior - even if he doesn’t realize it yet. Shitty choice on Mark’s part...
Well at least I’m following the same Anonymous in the comments. This is about these two boys, not who they’ve slept with before unless they go there. Another Five Star chapter