All Comments on 'U&A Day 01 Pt. 01'

Please, go on.....

Definatly need more of this story, please.....

thank you....

Great start to a multiple segmented story. Are you working on part 2? If not, I'm encouraging you to continue writing. I'll be checking back--please don't disappoint. Many Thanks

This has to be one of the worst stories! WTF were u thinking when u wrote this..

I could find a priest to write a better story!

you should have the keyboard taken away from you!!!!

Go wank off until you come YFI

Ignore The moron that wrote the first comment. This story has potential and I hope the following chapter is come up soon!

Anonymous, it's fine that you may not have liked the story. But it's no help to the author or the site generally for you to make that type of statement.

If you think the author could improve the writing, please be constructive and say what it was about the story that you believe could have been done better.

For my part, I thought it was a nice simple start to what could become an interesting series of relationships between the cousins and their aunt and uncle.

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I agree good start , Looking forward to the next part. Is that anger and jealously I detect in that comment/ trash from anonymous ? Haha sounds like it.

One cannot help but respect the diversity of opinions expressed here. Please note: for those who would like to read more of this story, there are indeed more parts on the way.

A good start for a great story.

good start for a great story