All Comments on 'Ultimate Black Fantasy Vanessa'

the foreplay by the pool kept me wet, and the sex kept me squirting so many wonderful times

Oh joy pure cunt for sucking and fucking and fucking and sucking, squirting down my throat, so I get drunk on cunt juice and totally blissed out. More and more please and soon. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk

I really like this story . It's almost RARE these days to read about Adults and not 20 somethings or teenagers . More please !

This sounds like the build up to a continuation...........IJS.

I'm getting ready to meet a goddess like this and i'm going to fucker longer and harder than joseph did her. I am going to place my cumm so far and deep into her. I also want to take her to my shower and fuck her like she's never been fucked before.

Sexy. I wish I could find a white man;)

I enjoy Point of View stories and do not mind the occasional change to a different person's POV. However, the frequent changes in this story became distracting.

This does not appear to be your usual style, and perhaps you were experimenting with something different. In this case, it did not work. Please stick to one person's POV, or at least stay with one person's POV for a section of the story before switching to a different person for the next section.

BTW, I was curious why there is so little description of Joseph's wife. This story had more than any other story and it was still very little. Some readers might be more sympathetic towards Joseph's extramarital activities if they knew he was not getting any sex inside his marriage and his wife gave him explicit, or at least implicit permission to get his needs satisfied elsewhere. Then again, there is so much anger on this site directed towards those in unconventional relationships that it might not make any difference.

Thoroughly enjoyed this. You should follow up. Great read!

Incredibly charged perfect dream

Vanessa definately turned me on. I too love black women. It reminded me of when I lost my virginity to another very sexy ebony beauty in California.