All Comments on 'Ultimate Resort: The Medical Ch. 01'

by BorderReiver

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

To start a story directly into some kind of sexual activity, without any preceding mental/emotional build-up, is a surefire way of losing the interest of this reader. Since the story appears to be just a simple fantasy on the level of a porn movie script, I didn't bother to read on, but rather went on to find something else more exciting.

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