All Comments on 'Un Sejour Dans Le Sud De La France Ch. 05'

Like where this seems to be going!

I've enjoyed all five chapters of this series. I like that you've allowed the sex to to progress slowly. It's not until chapter 5 here that the three lovers actually a "Threeway." I would like to read about Lesbian sexplay between Beth and Terri. I would like Beth to confess that one of the reasons she's encouraged Tommy and Terri is that that has allowed her to make love to Terri somehow by proxy. But now that they have shared the three-way, she realizes she's bisexual. But she doesn't want Tommy to think less of her or be grossed out for her being "Gay." Maybe in comforting Beth, Tommy can admit to Beth and Terri his attraction for Alex.

This is a good series. Don't give up on it. There's do much more to explore with these characters. And I like the frankness, and the slow pace of your exploration.

You lost me when Tommy's gay side showed up and he wanted to get it on with Alex.