All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 07'

we're are with u my dear,

oh the story is mwaaaah,the more i read the higher i fall in love,its apity that i still feel lyk nick is more romantic than luis,so show us what u got

i want it more than anything else,hahaha

the morning scenes,oh God i immagined my self in luis's arms,.God things are romantic

the breath taking shower scene,was lovely...The shopping whole scene has been mwaaah.Oh how luis looked at Aid...Luidans are cute!!!

the love making scene,fuck i was horny,damn i am HORNY

that baby is Aidan,isnt he???But how did he survive that death,he fallen didnt he???

according to wyatt's power,thats wat Aid have..God am stressed.But i want tension now,luidans fighting for the king,yah..Let those fools come,..Hehehehe

oh the dances were mwaah,but let luis break dances,sings for Aid,hahaha i love these guys

let luis be rougher,let the next sex scene contain dirty talk,Aid provoke luis..Let it be intimate than Adrianicks

i love u king himself

I knew Wyatt would come back ... A magician now worried about a baby from years ago.

I wonder if Aidan realizes that he is about to fulfill a prophecy? Oh I am loving this we are about to see a Kick Ass Aidan and it sounds that Wyatt has control of Luis so we will see Aidan fight for his life and loved one!!!

Oh yes loving it !!!!!

Got me running from school to check,hahaha thanks i had one exams

the theme song is All of me by j.Legend..The guys are mwaabh

i respect and love u my van/King Himself may the Lord bless u,and us and me also,hahaha

lets see tension and rough intimate,romantic slow love

mwaaaaaaaaaah

When the woman and baby were being chased they reached a cliff and fell over ... they were never found. Somehow they survived. Aidan is the magician prophecied ... but then of course I could be wrong, but who else could it be that will save Luis?

Can Aidan get pregnant I mean he's got magic and all and it will be wonderful if they can have their own little boy ,sue me its fantasy so .As for evil it never win.

I had to come to the end of the chapter after the first page, because I have been wanting to say something for a while, but kept forgetting. I checked your biography and it states you are gay, what I do not understand is you keep saying how he became gay. The first page of this chapter states he became gay after being cheated on. He was already gay, people do not just become gay. You ever hear someone asking a straight person when did you know you was straight, never, because like the gay man he was born like it. I find it hard to believe, in this day and age people still say these things, and they believe it is a choice, tell that to all the gay troubled teens who kill themselves from being bullied. This old gals rant is over, apart from that love all your stories.