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kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

i knew it wasn't my Aidan!

Unlike the family I had complete faith in him.

Now he needs to have faith in himself and in his powers to save the kingdom and those he loves.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
why??Why??Why???Vanalas why?????

Why the fuck did william have to use Aid,..And..He killed the priest???

Fuck,this chapter was hurtful,,and suprising but annoyingly i wanted to continue reading

God,..I feel much hatred now,i hate william lyk pee..He even have the guts to long for our luis!!!!!!????

what hurts is how he killed the priest,oh my priest,and he attempted to kill granny???I HATE HIM..GOD I HATE HIM,I HATE HIM.IF AT ALL I GET ACHANCE,I COULD KILL HIM

do u kno what hurts most??i couldnt get mad at Aid neither at luis,coz none of them was in amistake..God it hurts looking lyk afool infront of that trust and love u

He made Luis hate Aid??our sweet king...Our sweet family..above all..Luis hating...

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

ENOUGH,ENOUGH...now if its war,let it be...Huh its pay back time..Now its william's turn to suffer..Neither any them remain alive..I hate them lyk shit..I want them to get hurt too..That stinking ass of williaj there is no way it shud get our luis..Luis is ours.NOT ANYONE ELSE'S... HUH

Our sweet priest.hanna.king.ruby.oh the two grannys..oh ethan..our goergous luis...they ar so hurt

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Now how will Aid show the truth??How will they reconcile with luis???

Poor Aid.He is all alone.I wonder where he is

its revenge now..That has exceeded the limits..Post soon..Please vanalas my king

i dont have atheme song..Am just too hurt..Can all way too good to goodbyes work???

But william?,no way to luis..Never..HUH

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

A song for Aidan ... I'll walk with God form the operetta Student Prince. At the moment he needs to walk with god to get through this.

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

A song for Luis and his family 'Faith' ... They need to have faith in Aidan

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Wow! These comments are intense. I feel the same way. Vanalas, you are a good writer to draw out those reactions. I’m mad, annoyed, and upset too, but I’m in hopes this will get better in the next chapter. Thanks for writing for our enjoyment even if it’s not all enjoyable.

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