All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 12'

I love my man ... but not sure if I would want to be pregnant! Saw the ex-wife struggle when she had 4 ceasareans ... boy was that enough I felt everything and got sicker than she ever did!

Loving Aidan...

You know you have the true marking of a good writer ,the way you try to accommodate your readers, its truly amazing, your ability to tell a tale ,can't wait for Aidan to come to their rescue cause they are going to need him soon, and then for Luis to find out about the pregnancy, can't wait for more.

oh God,,,,i love that.I lyk it when my lovely couple has achild...thats another crazy luis or hana,well the sex of the bubu will matter,uhmmmmm yummy,yummy,yummy,hahahaha..I wana see luis's face when he finds out the truth,hehehe

i loved Aid's face expression..How he has laughed calling it ajoke...Hahaha,yum,nom

justin will really be good...Oh that guy is Ethan's,yeah i wish seeing them making romantic eye contact,huhaha,yummy

oh how Aid rescued his family from the palace was MWAAAAH,

boy.the guy can play action movies

that sudden appearance and disappearance..Hehe,how he faced luis and the king..Oh the argument in the room..God Aid can minimise..Do u remember how he has abused luis???Hahaha

God is good,Aidan has used the exact words i wanted"dont ask me stupid questions..."Hahaha,mwaaaaaah..Keep it up van..Oh hanna..Oh atleast granny and Ethan atleast are safe

the guards were thrown lyk apolythene ba......Hahahahahahaha

U see van..the title i gave to u is slowly getting to u my king..Am not only the one who appreciates yo yummy stories,uhmmn,mwaaaaaah,i love u

the theme song is roar again ...Oh even the climb by joe mcelddery

post soon coz action is coming soon,hohoho

let me read again...THE KING HIMSELF

Awesome story. I so love your writing.

This has a overtone of another story on this site. A lot of similar tone of a story called Savage Desire.