All Comments on 'Uncertain Desires Ch. 03'

I really like this story! I'm on everyday to make sure you haven't updated it!

Great, but please make the chapters longer, or at least don't put the irrelevent scenes in (eg ben and damien's physical fighting)that slow the story down... Keep it up!

P.S these scenes are fine, but feel like they are taking from speeding up the story, and if you keep writing like this and go for a decent story length, you're looking at 20 or so chapters.

Good writing, nice work. More please.

Your story is coming along well; however, the grammatical and spelling errors throughout are a distraction to what is a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing your work. There are a number of editors that others use on this site who would likely assist you.