by pdrye
Pt 2 should have her getting pregnant and him having and impregnating his sister also.
I would like to see Chapter 2, since you did a good job foreshadowing some history between he and his sister.
I liked the story, but please use a volunteer editor if you post part two. The misspellings and inconsistencies were a distraction, and kept me from giving a full 5 stars. (i.e. tied her facing down but then sucked her tits and clit?)
I'm always surprised when a commenter who is reading porn stories in the Incest category cries rape. This is fantasy and at no point did she tell him to stop. If your that morally conscious, you shouldn't be reading internet smut!
So hard and delicious , loved it , write more please love the hot bdsm ...
This story was well written. I enjoyed the combination of incest, bdsm, and rough sex. It also flowed very nicely.
wow you do captivate a story.. Love the dominace of pure sex...Great story.Looking forward to reading the next chapter..