by Tedluvs38C
The story line wasn't rushed. The buildup flowed naturally. Even the males were sensual without being crude, degrading, or debase. My OCD is eternally grateful as well. Usually cant get through a paragraph without having to stop and correct something. Can't wait to see where you take us next time.
Clx
That was a turn on. Would love to read one with a different twist at the end like an accidental slip in leading to the sex.
Loooooove it so much, Onr of My favorites stories, I always wanted to read sensitivo nipple play and also soooo hot every CHAPTER