All Comments on 'Unconditional Love Ch. 02'

the first chapter was ok this chapter went down hill you are getting too many people involved and it will end in in a big mess or as an unrealistic fantacy it really turned me off when you put the part about her father beating her that should have put this in the bdsm or nonconsent area and was unnecessary if you continue which is unlikely going by the rest of the worthless writers on this site but if you do continue then make a decision and keep it to only two of them mother/son or sister/brother not both keep it believable and realistic

Since her brother has shown up on the scene, what's going to happen to poor Rob?

sorry, I thought you were going to continue the story you began.

fail