All Comments on 'Unconventional Theft Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
An idea

Not trying to dictate the story but...

I really liked the scene where Ashley was a passenger in Alex's body, so maybe in the future you could incorporate a similar scene, but the passenger has control over things the actual person doesn't, for example their emotions, or their orgasm, or different touched. Kind of like hallucinations caused by the person in you. I think it would be pretty cool. Just an idea though

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