All Comments on 'Unconventional Therapy Ch. 01'

Strange but interesting. Well written.

Gave it 5 stars.

I've read all 7 chapters to date. Great story line and execution!

Hope you explain the blackouts because as a reader it is just plain confusing. You gave no insight into any actions that anyone did. Why would a therapist risk her licence for a bit of dick.

You have not even explained the reason for the kids problems. The parents should have just sorted it out. No pocket money or gifts, full stop would have sorted the tart. She could get a job. The dick just told to pay his own way as he was working.

You need the help of a proof reader, too many word errors making it hard to flow as you read.

Will give it another chapter as your story is alright.

Lost me at the pegging.