by Racholobo26
I found it pretty good for a first timer. It' wasn't too dramatic with the love making, nor was it too long either. Got to the point of sensuality, and not so much raunchy straight forward sex.
Again, I liked it.
That story was incredible! You are an amazingly talented writer! I could imagine every moment that you described, and that is a credit to you. I was losing myself in every word that I read and I want to thank you for writing that, and making my day!