All Comments on 'Under Centaurian Protection Ch. 03'

have done any better myself. Now get the next chapter out quick!!!

Amy-

You are the only author I check for every day. Thank you for creating this wonderful world. I loved this story and all of them. I had tears in my eyes at the thought of Lila not making it through the birth. Another wonderful chapter.

Now don't make us wait so long for the next.

You are making me cry! Wonderful story, great chapter, and you bring perfect touches of realism into this fantasy story. Love it!

Please, please make it a happy ending...please.

I need my tissue box...oh my goodnes...

you don't kill off Lila. Callum has been in so much pain already. pls update soon!

You can't let lila die callum would'nt be able to handle it please update soon

How could you? She cannot die! Even though women still die in child birth, Lila just can't and what will Callum do if her loses her?

UHHHHH fix this! Please

no way, you're doing it to us again. I'm sitting here loving this story and you do this...cliffhanger and what's worse is Lila bleeding out? NO WAY, not fair not allowed *whimpers, cries*

YOU CANT..

LILA cant die.. Dont do that to poor Callum. He has already lost so much, dont make him lose his mate. You actully got be crying here. Please let Lila live some how. Please.

Oh my god! Please don't kill off Lila! Callum only just found his love, and he's been through so much pain already. The end where Callum is holding Lila and telling her to stay with him is just heartbreaking :'-(

I know Callum is a character in a story but the depth of his pain his capacity to love make him leap off the page. I read his story, watched as he began to love again, to believe in love again and triumph over his terror of loving again. It would be too cruel to let his MATE, his Lila pass on. Whew this chapter was a rollercoater.

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY VERY BEING DEPENDS ON WAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! WAT HAPPENS!?!?!?! WAT HAPPENS!?!?!

Please please please write fassssssssssssssssssssssssssst

but not too fast that it affects your work. just fast enough that i dont go crazy wondering

:P

please!!

you will end up with all your readers hating you. I swear it.

How could you leave us hanging there? I mean seriously your cruel this is the ONLY story I have on here right now and you left it at that?? I mean heck I REALLY hope that the next installment will be up in like a day or too I SO can't wait!!

I've checked back every day since you posted the last chapter looking for this one, and then you leave us hanging like that!! I hope the next one is coming right up! I love your writing and the way your characters love. Great writing.

PLEASE DON'T KILL HER OFF. IT WILL RUIN THE WHOLE STORY. I DON'T THINK I COULD READ ANYMORE IF SHE DIES. PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE!!! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!

a hanger?! nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!

please please please post the next chapter soon!!! i keep checking everyday!!! please?

Come on! You CAN'T leave me like this! And, PLEASE DON'T let her die! Callum has been through too much, already. And, just what is Julia going to do about Paul?

absolutely riveted to this story and hope you will continue to pursue this. I totally understand about the lengthy process in getting the approval to post this up, I have heard the same from other authors. It sounds worse than getting approval from councils to build homes. Anyhow, i know most authors have started to post at other websites like storiesonline.net which is quick to post your material. just a suggestion, but good luck. I look forward to the next installment.

you leave us all hanging! i hope you keep her around, i'd hate it if you killed her off

OMG...Please Please don't kill her...no!!!!!!!

Do not kill her off! This is the 1st time I've ever commented on what I've read on this site. This story line is great-and, yeah, okay, you should actually publish this through a publisher-because as someone else commented before, I would so buy this as a book (even though I am one of those with the "thing" about the anatomy!). Well, ignore that, I would really rather read it for free! I'll be back for more. DO NOT KILL HER OFF!

I've been reading your stories since I stumbled across the second installment of Rose and Thayer's story and have really enjoyed them - but please don't kill Lila off. Callum has had enough sadness in his life....

your writing is great and the cliffhangers are better than the soap operas. so please write soon. it would be great if you don't kill the human prisoners. maybe the centaurs are so smart to put them somewhere else so they can't find the camp anymore or have some special herb that causes them to lose memory. o - please finish the other story about alaina.

Your story is great, I come everyday to check if you've posted already.

Why would u do somting so evil, why in the world would u end the story like that? OMG.....please continue, i am dieing to know what happened. Please dont make Lila die! have a heart!.....Great story though, it has me on the edge of my seat...dont keep us waiting too long though.....

The next part has to be here soon!!! The cliff the story is hanging off of is driving me crazy!!! Please, please let them be ok! I love your stories BTW!!

..the rest of the story?????????

grrr don't let her die!!!

jeez, she better be ok! i'll be so mad if she isn't!

No, no, no...I refuse to believe that his mate will die. That would be beyond evil!

Wow, this is so nerve-racking !! Poor Lila and poor Callum. Such hopes for the baby that was coming and now Lila can die due to pph (postpartum hemorrhage) ...

Let's hope Julia or someone can help. They surely don't deserve this !

This is a very exciting series. I totally love it (as I did the other two). I voted it as fave. Keep up the good work.

My hart hurts