All Comments on 'Under Construction Ch. 05'

OMG say it aint so! Darren...

I am so invested in their story.

Shawna's reaction is exactly what i would have done.

I can't wait for your next chapter.

Josie : )

This story is incredible! My heart is breaking for Shawna and the way you wrote her reaction to the email was exactly how I would have responded. I love the exploration stories dealing with hidden desires and fantasties and everything we have been taught was wrong. Guess my love of them is in finding out others have them also.

Will be checking everyday for the next chapter. You are truly a gifted writer.