All Comments on 'Under Counter Encounter'

Nicely done! It was a fun story and I enjoyed the characterizations. This combined with the naughtiness in public factor made me hot!

A couple of grammatical errors but practice makes perfect. :)

Keeps me coming err..keeps them coming umm.. Keep up the good work! ;)

I think specially since I used to work in the hotel industry. Yum! Night audit was the funnest. Or was it housekeeping. *ponders*

Oh! Thank you for the read! It was intriguing, wet and fun.