by vampanya
For a blow job?
Seriously though, I thought the first 4 chapters were excellent! I loved how her neurotic mind wanders and waffles and you wrote it in such a way as ... Well it sounded the same as the way my neurotic mind wanders and waffles. However, all that build up for a blow job was a tad disappointing. Please know, I admire your writing and will, at this point, read anything you submit!
Your new fan
I would give anything to have an experience like that but even without I feel like I have since you describe it so well. I've always fantasized about a man having that kind of power over me. You make me wish I was Alice. Seriously... amazing!
P.S. Thanks for getting me to cum, my boyfriend has never gotten me off like that!
-Aubrey