All Comments on 'Under His Thumb'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Watch out for the Jolly Green Giant

Pretty well crafted. Characters are well described. Leaves the reader looking for followup chapters...there are more, aren't there? Please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Dick Hertz?

Lot's of tongue in cheek. Well fleshed out characters.

Catholic GirlCatholic Girlover 18 years ago
Please keep up the chapters

This story is different from the rest of your work. Please keep up the chapters.

dertygerldertygerlover 18 years ago
She was riding his what????

No telling what some horny executives will use to get off.

generalismageneralismaabout 18 years ago
OMG...So good.

Oh the men are so sniveling and nasty. The young woman, is not so innocent. So good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Sex and the single girl

The title should be BDSM and the single girl.

pagan girlpagan girlover 17 years ago
Character names

The tongue in cheek names of the characters tipped me off that this is a well thought out story...and it is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot AND Well Written

I enjoyed your descriptions--they were very vivid and your writing style really appealed to me. A very arousing story. Thanks.

PolyVoyeurPolyVoyeuralmost 13 years ago
one of my favorites

enjoyed it tremendously

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It's good except...

it's not nonconsent/reluctance. She already desires this type of sex and she initiates here.

EzrollinEzrollinalmost 8 years ago
non consensual ?

I see it as erotic couplings, I thought it was well written but would have been more titillating if she had been mildly compromised and then broken down in degrees, mho

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
loved it!

Please write more!

BastardenBastardenabout 4 years ago
Sweet...

Absolutly good reading material and hopefully more to come

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