All Comments on 'Under Lock and Key'

This was a true story? A bit one sided don't you think? What did you do for him? You didn't touch him at all. You being so selfish was a turn off!!!!

I loved your description of the events as they unfolded. I loveed it. Keep up the good writing.

I don't think it was one-sided at all. Not every sexual experience is about the man getting a blow job. The author was incredibly descriptive and I felt as if I was right there, feeling everything being described. Wonderful work. Keep it up!

This is erotic fiction at its best. I love that you kept it in the first person writing it. I also loved your cheeky little narational comments, they kept things playful. I was there with you every step of the way. I thought it was very senual; the touches and kisses and the feelings that you so brilliantly described...there's a lot more here than just 'yeah his cock was big and hard....yawn'. Well done and keep writing...oh yeah, and ignore that git who said it was one sided...let him write his own story! Lol xxxxxxx

The way you linger leisurely on every erotic detail. If you're half as good having sex as you are writing about it, you are one smoking hot woman!