All Comments on 'Under the Cartier Bridge'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice

wasted his sweet cum...should have had him blast in your ass

seeker71seeker71over 13 years ago
Good start

Hot tale! If there is going to be a next chapter maybe be less clinical with the terminology, lots of anus and sphincter references. I would hate to read man pu$$y or anything, but puckered hole, or just a reference to how hot he felt inside of the character. I will keep looking for more from you. Thank-you

Shell

cmlvrvacmlvrvaabout 13 years ago
Tell us more...

Hot story.... better if the guy was oulled into the shed... reluctently....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
cold writing for cold times

Hope you've evolved some sensitivity in the five years of living since this story was composed. That goes for the guy who used you, as well. Maybe you've become friends now, and go curling together, eh?

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