All Comments on 'Under the Influence of a Summer Night'

by randibyrnes

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Gary13Gary13about 10 years ago
VERY good!

I've enjoyed your other stories so far, but this one is GREAT! Looking forward to more.

Jim44444Jim44444almost 12 years ago
Well written

A good story but I felt that the ending was abrupt. How does the rest of the vacation play out now that they have gotten together? What about their boyfriends? Definitely room for a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Very nice

Well written and I agree about not wasting time with age, height, bust size, eye color etc.

TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimalmost 12 years ago
Loved it

Very erotic and well written.

Vacations bring on a very different mood don't they?

Danno_61455Danno_61455almost 12 years ago
WELL PLAYED TAIL

interesting little story here. I enjoyed that discourse you opened with. Leap in without all those expected and boring statistical points of age and bust size. Let a reader build the image of what they think is sexy.

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Thank you for the comments, hope to submit more often in the coming months. Sorry, I don't send out pictures. Thanks for reading and voting. Randi